Revision Progress

My revision is going well so far. I mainly use professor’s review and peer review to revise my essay. I fixed many mistakes like typo, grammar mistakes and logic fallacies. When I finish these fixations, I take out peer review worksheet to figure out whether my essay fulfill the requirements. If it did not, I would make further revisions. Thus, the article becomes more and more readable. The most troubling thing for me is adding citation. I forgot to cite sources in the first draft,and I also did not record all sources I used, so it is hard to find out every source. But I am trying my best to do it.